Sunday, September 6, 2009

The boy who was in the bathroom.....

A group of boys who played in the school soccer team went on a field trip with the coach. The destination for trainig was a near by temple. (In the past, temples in Japan offered space for shelter to help cut cost of field trips for schools)
Kaiki, one of the boys, notice that there was a grave yard right next to the temple. He wasn't scared, but didn't like the feeling of spending the night next to the grave yard.

The boys went out hiking that day, and did some muscle training. That night, during dinner, one of the boys mentioned the stories involved with the temple.

"I heard that people saw weird things around here, like ghosts."

Kaiki and the other boys laughed and made fun of the boy who seemed scared.

"But it's true! Look at all these grave yards!"

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That night, Kaiki had to go to the rest room. Being his age, he was not afraid of ghost, but he was certainly uncomfortable with the chilly hall way. He left his futon, trying not to wake all the other guys around him.

When he went to the rest room, he notice that there was a window. Outside, he could see the graves in the dark night.

Creeped out, Kaiki tried to finish as soon as he could, when something caught his eye.
There was a woman, over a grave.
At first, Kaiki thought the woman was crying over the grave. It was past mid-night, so that didn't seem too logical. Soon, he realize that she was eating something. As he looked closer, he notice she had bones in her hand.

"wha....!!!" A gaspt escaped Kaiki's mouth...

The woman, looked up as soon as possible. Her pale and ugly face started up.

"How dare you see me!!"

The woman got up and started running towards Kaiki.

He got out of the bathroom soon as he can...

"What is she? What was she doing? Why is she eating bones?"

He kept on telling himself.
As he ran into the room where everyone is sleeping, he got into his bed. Now that he was with his team mates, he felt safe. "The "woman" was surely just some person who was a nut case. she didn't see me." Kaiki told him self....

But he hears foot steps out in the hall way, fallowed by a song.
"The boy who was in the bathroom has cold feet... the boy who was in the bathroom has cold feet...."
He turns to the closed door, and sees a shadow walking towards it.



He turns back into his bed, hoping she doesn't come in. Unfortunatly, the door opened.
Kaiki can hear the woman opening up the futon, and

5 comments:

  1. and what.....this was really good ....

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  2. This story is from old japanese comic,i think its called haunted school stories

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    1. I can't find the link to the comic. Do you know where can I read it by any chance? Thanks.

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  4. OH! i think she sang that song cos if the boy walked through the chilly hall then his feet would be cold but the others were in bed so their feet would btw this story was soo brilliant good job :)

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